I need advice about writing stories, any advice?

http://www.quizilla.com/stories/8269879/鈥?/a>





That's my ffirst chapter...not too fond of it. It feels like none of the characters have any personality. Any help? I'm 15...:)I need advice about writing stories, any advice?
Hmm i think the main thing is to try not to make your characters act like any other characters. Try thinking of unique things and add alot of detail





Im sure you'll be great! I need advice about writing stories, any advice?
No your characters are really funny and interesting! I especially like Lynn.





:)
wow that was surprising ending!!! ... its a good start though