What is some advice about this poem?

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i was keeping up with my thought life


centered around my assigned wife,





but when i tried to intigrate the rest of my day


all the things i enjoy to think about went away,





So i tried philosophy to help me fix it myself


it was better than any medicine on any shelf,





But then i saw what others were doing in my world with me


so sure of their circumstances and ideas they will not agree,





so i left this off here


try to tell me if i am very clear!What is some advice about this poem?
Total marks awarded 75.95%What is some advice about this poem?
i am more interested in what they said about this!
its $hit